Talk:Aventurine(AventurineSun)/@comment-26268426-20180317030114

Aventurine review (For real this time)
Ok let's take it from the top.

Appearance
Everything is fine here.

Personality
Checks out mostly, but there isn't enough about her struggles and how she acts when confronted with one. It's not grounds for rejection.

Weapons and abilities
Seems to check out. You have all factors considered.

Everything else
Holy Toledo this is a wall of text. It seems fine though after picking apart everything. I would advise you use subtitles in order to break it up and help the form.

Verdict: Accepted
Take my suggestions please. But you're clear.