Thread:Toluene/@comment-26840812-20161217012319/@comment-26840812-20161225011745

REVIEW OF Season 1:

I will start talking about characters. I love how they are portrayed, the way they joke, discuss argue, it is just really real, I can perfectly picture the mannerisms, the faces and the way they express words in almost every scene. There is nothing bad I can say of the characters rather than hauyene, in my opinion, could have have used a bit more of developement, rather than just being there and talking a bit. Though I do love how Hauyene just became more docile to the gems she once hated, love that a lot, and the deatil where she unlike her cousins, doesn't act as sassy.

I have only one true issue with this series, and it is the fact that I CAN NOT FREAKING WAIT for the mysteries to be solved... Just Joking, I love the mysteries, and I do want them to be solved, its itching.

I quite enjoy the way to pace the episodes and well the timejumps work, sometimes I'd think time jumps would cut out a lot of development, but it actually contributes, errases unnecessary filler, just reading them train would be boring in my opinion. I love how you at first, even if you didn't mean it, imply Pyrochlore is quite powerful, to later just refute that she in fact is quite "weak" and fearful to say the least.

OVERALL, I love the detail you put into the characters, the little glances you write, the different situations where its hown some are nicer than others, the way you subtlely implied the "antagonists" went to the same place as the protagonists. The way Hauyene goes from an insufferable pebble to a more self-aware gem.

Sometime that was not clear to me, The Creators are that pair of gems right? What are the Andaras? like some wise-gems? Are they lower than diamonds or higher? It confuses me.

I love how you kept Aquamarine's Cluster history even here, as I remember I had a hand on that happening to them... Never expected you'd stick with that aspect even til now. I really wish Heliodor would pop up somewhere in the background :P Just Kidding, that'd be too forced