Thread:Steven watcher/@comment-27007365-20160810061835/@comment-27847292-20160824012342

Periandlapis007 wrote: Celestite:Gold!Guess what!

Gold:hm?

Celestite:I watched all my kids die and I laaaughed after!

Celestite:*is laying on a bench*I love you bench...You've always been here for me...Ah...Remember Highscool bench?These were the good times...But I always slept on you..*huggs bench*

Celestite:*sings Cosmic love*

Gold:Stop being better then me at everything

Celestite:Stop dating Greigite*drops mike*

Via:Mommy how was I made?

Celestite:You came out of a magical blood rainbow

Gold:Yea that's exactly what happened

Via:Ok!

Gold:Onyx why is Celtite prego again?

Onyx:shrugs*

Celestite:Onyx Skylers coming!!!!

Onyx:Our kids are coming?!

Gold:*glares*

Gold:Hydrokenisis?Celest?Is there another parent of Vias?

Celestite:No!!!

Two days earlier

Celestite:Oh Aqua..~

Margy:Aqua I don't wanna be a woman!!

Aqua:Too bad

Margy:But-But!!*cries*

Aqua:You big baby.

NONE IF THIS IS CANNON Okay, first, I'll tackle them on individually

1. This one is...strange. It has no skit to my knowledge showing this prior or after (although this is kinda biased because I rarely use canon). It just doesn't seem like a joke I would get, it seems more like...something kinda stale.

2. Same with #1, this one is weird to me and its just...Celes talking to a bench? I think this joke would've been better with a reaction to what she's doing, but showing Celes flirting with a bench alone just makes the joke seem off.

3.  ....when has Gold ever shown Greigite romantic affection or vice versa? Gold hasn't shown any romantic interest in dead people, but its more funny than the other two, and Celes actually shows something people would find hilarious!

4. This is funny, but I'm sorry to say that the delivery is more funny than the punchline. Why Celes said "magic blood rainbow" isn't explained, and so it just pops out of the blue, and all that follows are agreements.

5. This one kinda seems like a parody of my Greiglestite skits, except with Gold instead of Greigite: Celes cheats on Gold right in front of him, not showing a regret, and Gold gets upset at that. If Celes was 110% cockier, I would call this an exact copy.

Also, why would Gold ask why celes is pregnant?

6. It just repeated a joke from the literal last skit, except Celes doesn't tell Gold. While this may seem hypocritical since I sometimes do the same Greiglestite thing in a row, that's usually because I'm making a little arc about that and/or Celes is leaving her or is trying to make Greigite purposely upset (in the skit). It seems more like its own thing than the last one though, so I'll give you that.

7. ...what? This one is more random than the 1st and 2nd one! And also, this reminds me of Margys age confusion (is he a few weeks? 6 months? 1 year? 10?!). This joke just comes out of the blue. Its never shows why Margy is turning into a woman, though I love Aqua's personality. Its a fresh change from the "lol we're all the same kind of random" people.

Now, for the skits overall...

Overall: It kinda seems dependant on "lolrandom" humor, almost all the characters are just the same level of random, and Aqua is pretty much the only character to break from this. Like I said, the fifth and sixth ones just seem like Greiglestite skits with Gold copypasted over Greigite, with Gold even being the "straight man" of their relationship (no, I don't mean it like heterosexual male. A straight man, in comedy, is someone who is actually smart and more cautious than the other characters) instead of Greigite. The bench thing and the Margy thing doesnt seem to have a delivery, nor a punchline. Its as if they were just rushed in.

im probably coming of as mean and rude, aren't i? aaaaa im sorry ;-;