Thread:Foxy02016/@comment-26268426-20170823152616

I see you have been improving your characters. One thing is that for the Personality, try to look at my page for Prasiolite.They should have a more developed personality than just a few words, and also give how they would respond to certain situations. Also same for relationships, describe the nature of the relationships and as Dayven suggested before, describe how they met each other. Other than that, try following the format of pages like mine and Use infoboxes more, even if you don't have images. 