Talk:Rose Water Opal (RadiatedFluorite)/@comment-26268426-20180107031739

Opening Note
I don't do many of these, but it's that this page seems like this page will be a delight to review!

Appearance
Perfectly well done.

Personality
Somewhat one sided, but I assume there will be more about it elaborated in roleplays. Not grounds for rejection.

Weapon
Seems fair. My only Critique is that it seems to be more of an umbrella than a parsol. Parsols are meant to be lightweight and protect from sun, umbrellas are made out of stronger materials and made for rain. Not Grounds for Rejection.

Abilities
You have a very unique array of abilities, but you may want to have a limitations section to better defne your abilities. Sadly, this is grounds for rejection

Now for the part you've been waiting for

Grounds
No defined limitations on abilities

Other Notes
This verdict means what you have so far is good, but right now all you need is to just improve a few aspects. In fact, this page was very nice to read through! Keep up the good work!