User blog:Democritos/I need feedback

Ok, so recently I made a fanfiction series, named " Pietersite", about a stable cluster learning how to use his powers and train against his will to become a gem geoweapon. Other than the far off scenario, I have seen a few flaws here and there about the series. Like most humans, I desire the guidance of others to know if I am doing something right or wrong. Now I noticed this, either a count of how many times I had viewed the page to constantly edit it, or how many users have viewed the latest episode. I need to know what you people think.

Now, first off I need a review of the series. If you think it's good, please point out what I'm doing correctly, and I could do more of that.

If you think it sucks, then you do too please give me constructed criticism on what you think I should improve on in the series.

Not that I'm trying to look needy making this blog post, couldn't care less what people type about me behind a screen, but reviews will probably help me become a better writer, knowing what I should improve on and how.

Thnx.

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