Thread:Deyvan Salez/@comment-31628318-20170628103654/@comment-27132726-20170628110935

By unfairly judging your characters you mean critizing them? Well, I shoulda given you constructive criticizm. Welp, here it is.

Emerald: A corrupted gem that can somehow control itself and can teleport. Mary sue too. Make Emerald not teleport so fast, not fusion(At least not 4 man fusion), not vampire, not half human, and the corrupted part making Emerald lash

Green Diamond:Improve on personality, and make them have realistic personality instead of just "trusting for no reason" Mary Sue too.

Obsidian:Give her a better personality, better abilities to make her stand out and more backstory.

Moonstone/Sunstone:Improve on their personality, give them a backstory on why they transform, and they shouldn't be able to control time.

Amber:Make her have a more realistic personality, instead of just "Normally calm and angry", also she needs more backstory and what not. Mary Sue.

And lastly, I suggest you don't make MAJOR use of Canon characters within your characters. Have a nice day.