Thread:Agunachopace/@comment-26944982-20160710071917/@comment-26944982-20160710081641

Agunachopace wrote: Great start! I like how the story focuses in Onyx... Always wondered about his background everytime Gold metioned him.

Good plot so far. The ending seem a little rushed, like Onyx and Obsidian not being incredibly concerned about the explosion. But I liked the dialogues and the battle moment.

(Good Jet mentioning btw...) Thanks and I know how to fix that I am going to do that now