User blog:Zenzizenzic/Yo, I need an opinion!! :0

So like I have this series called: !

And it's my first fanon series that I am working on that I actually like. Because we all know how my very first one went... SOOoo I would really like some feedback on how I'm doing with the new one. So please leave any feedback here or on the series page letting me know what you like what you don't like, what I should change and whatnot. And I'll leave the overview of the series here.


 * Clears throat and prepares Morgan Freeman voice.

Long since erased from the records of time, there once existed two clans who served as overseers of history for the powers that be: The Gems and the Humans. The clans paid each other great respect, and their efforts to maintain the balance between them defended the just passage of time. Yet, one day, that balance was toppled. The once harmonious clans fell into disagreement and stoked the flames of hatred against each other, resulting in an era of strife. The conflict between the Gem and the Humans threw all of Earth into a chaotic loop of battle, ambush, assassination, and casualty. It was truly a gruesome war. Despite the tremendous radiance of Gods shining upon them, the Humans were gradually weakened by the assault of the secretive Gems. Years after the balance was lost, the war had ended in the Gems' favor. Their victory was short-lived. Fearing the gems' dark abilities, humans began to condemn the remaining Gems. They launched the Gem Hunts, rounding up the battle-weary gems with little resistance and subjugating those who wished to cTrntinue the struggle. Human faith in the miracles of their God pushed the gem hunts further, and soon the gems, keepers of their kind, were extinguished from the Earth. All but ten.

 Time for the best part!