Thread:Aptos/@comment-26840812-20160701022850/@comment-27304481-20160701030734

It needs a bit of clarification of detail and such, but it's pretty good. A lot of suspense. Though the description of forget-me-not gem (who's name i ironically forgot) was kinda confusing. Which makes sense, given their nature, but i think that can be made a little more straightforward.