Thread:Moussaieffs/@comment-26320859-20160528041016/@comment-28857181-20160528091108

Next time, please ask for character approval on the Check Please board. For now, I've read over your characters.

On Green Ruby, I would explain what the spells do, what they are, etc. I have approved them but I would like to see those changes.

On Star Garnet, the sentence in the abilities cuts off so I cannot approve the character until the sentence has been completed.

Danburite seemed okay to me.

With all of your gems, I'd like to see more on a personality for each of them. Thank you for your time!

 Over here!