Thread:Toluene/@comment-26840812-20161217012319/@comment-31177040-20161225022303

I've been trying my hardest to express how characters interact with one another and how they act as individuals. A lot (but not all) of characters in other series that I read end up becoming the same. Also just to clarify. There is not a main character in this series. There are just characters in general. It may seem like Galena is the main character because he's the one I'm putting a lot of detail in because of the plot, but he is not a main character. Haüyne also acts differently because I have a major, MAJOR plan for the future of her.

Mystery reveals are also going to play a big role in the series. Glad you noticed.

The pace is something I've been struggling with. At times, I feel as if I'm rushing the plot, and other times I feel like episodes are too long. And tbh, I had no idea where I was going with the first few episodes, so let's just say Pyro's switch in personality was on purpose. ;)

The mystery of The Creators and The Andaras are important elements and all I can really tell you is that The Andaras are ranked higher than the Diamonds.

I honestly had no idea that Aqua's story was going to carry on a year later. And let me just say that his story is one of the main three factors that kicks off the main event (the title). And Heliodor and Almandine can pop up! There's nothing wrong with that. That actually helps me with an episode I was planning.

Thank you so much for this, Mind Player! This was just what I needed. I'll try my hardest to keep these going.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

-Leu