User blog:Iced Botte/Fastlane Thrills - Sneak Peek of "Several Millenia Later"

Hi Steven Universe Fanon Wiki, I'm posting this sneak peek of the direct pilot of Fastlane Thrills (I'll make the page later, I promise!) so you can tell me what I need to edit or change.

Sneak Peek
'''The sunset was shimmering in the noon, where the Cityscape Spire wasn't making that much of a noise, in fact, Lapis Diaspore and Danalite just finished up a swift arguement, and them being immature, they are giving eachother the silent treatment. The two glare at eachother, while Rose Gold sighs.'''

Rose Gold: Ugh, you two aren't gonna keep at it forever. Just stop it and truce, we're a team after all.

Danalite holds her breathe in deep anger. Rose Gold: Please stop fighting.

Lapis Diaspore shrugs.

Rose Gold: I'll step on your gem like Inca Rose accidentally did to Rosinca if you don't.

Danalite: UGH FINE ROSE.

Lapis Diaspore: I win, cool.

Danalite: You may have won, bUT HAVE YOU GOT IN THE DAMN HALL OF FAME?

Danalite puts Lapis Diaspore in a headlock, while Lapis Diaspore flails their legs in the air.

Rose Gold: Hehehe, gems these days.

Rock Candy Druzy dashes towards Rose Gold.

Rose Gold: What happened now, Rocky?

Rock Candy Druzy: Rozzy.

Rose Gold: Oh no.

Rock Candy Druzy takes Rose Gold to a room filled with rose gold colored bubbles, Danalite takes Lapis Diaspore out of the headlock and follows Rock Candy Druzy and Rose Gold, Lapis Diaspore takes a deep breathe and does the same as Danalite and follows the gems.

Rose Gold: Oh dear, the bubble's appearing to be hatching.

Rock Candy Druzy: Mhm.

Danalite: Woah, where did these gems come from???

Rose Gold jumps up out of fright.

Rose Gold: HheeYOOOOOOOOUH! When did you get here Danalite, Lapis Diaspore?

Lapis Diaspore: I dunno.

Danalite: We followed you.

Rose Gold sighs.

Rose Gold: As you two know, Rosinca got cracked by Inca Rose with her stepping on her accidentally, but there is the bubble Rozzy's gem was encased in. But, there's more gems, like the fallen residents of this very spire, such as Creme Rose Pearl, Iron Rose, Rose Opal, etc.

Danalite gets close to Rosinca's gem

Danalite: Woah..... Interesting!

Rose Gold: NO TOUCHIES!

Danalite touches the bubble.

Danalite: BUT MOM!

Rose Gold: I'M NOT YOUR MOM. But anyways, REFRAIN FROM TOUCHING THE BUBBLE, IT'S DANGEROUS

Danalite holds the bubble, and Rose Gold lets out a shriek.